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Post by Chelsea Armstrong on Sept 17, 2013 22:10:29 GMT -5
Good, bad...any at all? Would like to know what you think or what I needa work on. Thanks guys
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lenton
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Post by lenton on Sept 17, 2013 22:15:40 GMT -5
No need to have that back and forth "filler" dialogue. Just try to get to the point and expand on it from the early parts of the rplay. I did enjoy the whole shoulder getting bandaged up aspect of it.
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Michael James
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Post by Michael James on Sept 17, 2013 23:05:47 GMT -5
I thought the whore house comment was awesome  And just to be clear I am technically a man-slut just in case it comes up again. Ha ha. Phenomenal work as always! |
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Post by Chelsea Armstrong on Sept 18, 2013 6:13:07 GMT -5
Thanks Ian and lol thanks for the clarification Michael, thank ya |
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Vincent Hale
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Post by Vincent Hale on Sept 19, 2013 21:38:55 GMT -5
I thought this roleplay was a very well constructed piece. I enjoyed how it gave a glimpse into her toughness as well as transitioning into the 'trash talk' element of the roleplay fluidly. It was of a good length and makes me want to see more from you in the future. 9/10.
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Post by Chelsea Armstrong on Sept 19, 2013 21:57:23 GMT -5
Thanks Vincent |
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Vincent Hale
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Post by Vincent Hale on Sept 19, 2013 22:39:30 GMT -5
Not a problem . |
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And just to be clear I am technically a man-slut just in case it comes up again. Ha ha. Phenomenal work as always! 
