Michael James
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Post by Michael James on Sept 18, 2013 9:27:33 GMT -5
Bring it.
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Post by Jason Kaine on Sept 18, 2013 11:53:30 GMT -5
God you're an asshole....but so am I so I can't judge
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Post by Chelsea Armstrong on Sept 18, 2013 14:45:24 GMT -5
Absolutely loved it lol, you don't hold anything back that's forsure but I like that. Would rather have someone like that than someone who tiptoes around me...trust me i've seen it lol. But awesome work, this is gonna be a good match!
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Vincent Hale
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Post by Vincent Hale on Sept 19, 2013 21:42:23 GMT -5
I'll give you my thoughts on this as if it were two roleplays (The scene split dictates that it's almost a two-in-one kind of deal lol). I like the date/time/setting thing you put at the beginning of each scene (lol):: it's similar to what I like to do. It also allows us to picture it in our heads whilst reading, which adds to the whole roleplay in general. Both pieces were very well constructed and of a good length, keeping me entertained throughout. 10/10.
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Michael James
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Post by Michael James on Sept 20, 2013 7:42:45 GMT -5
Thanks for the feedback vincent! I've always tried to make my roleplays somewhat entertaining so people can feel like they're watching an actual promo. If I could I would hire a cast to play out my material on camera but that would take some serious funding lol. Unlike Kuk I cant act for shit so i've always been better off as a writer/director.
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Vincent Hale
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If you want to be respected, you've got to come earn it. I don't hand out respect like it's charity.
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Post by Vincent Hale on Sept 20, 2013 14:48:57 GMT -5
problems and yeah, the effort definitely payed off. It was a well-constructed piece and makes me want to read more from you in the future. (lol) I know what you mean by not being able to act. It's easier to write out how you want the characters to feel, rather than actually acting it yourself.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 22, 2013 19:34:51 GMT -5
Loved this piece. Thought it was very entertaining. Keep it up.
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