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Post by karremalbashir on Sept 19, 2013 13:44:05 GMT -5
so what did you think?
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Post by Chelsea Armstrong on Sept 19, 2013 17:28:15 GMT -5
Pretty good work from how I remember you used to be, only thing I'd prefer is for it to be alil longer but again that's just my opinion. Good work over all, might help you to read it out loud to yourself and make sure all the wording is correct...I'm guilty of this problem lol. But good job  |
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Post by karremalbashir on Sept 19, 2013 20:17:31 GMT -5
thanks chelsea
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Post by Chelsea Armstrong on Sept 19, 2013 20:25:44 GMT -5
ur very welcome
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Vincent Hale
EoV Superstar
If you want to be respected, you've got to come earn it. I don't hand out respect like it's charity.
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Post by Vincent Hale on Sept 19, 2013 20:37:42 GMT -5
Not a bad roleplay. A little short for my liking but still solid.
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Post by Jason Kaine on Sept 19, 2013 21:28:17 GMT -5
whered you get the awesome banner ian ma man?!
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Post by Tommy Rowan on Sept 21, 2013 2:19:30 GMT -5
*raises hand*
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