lenton
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Post by lenton on Sept 19, 2013 16:30:34 GMT -5
Thoughts on this please?
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Post by Chelsea Armstrong on Sept 19, 2013 17:32:11 GMT -5
Awesome work Ian! I really enjoyed this, I think I like it most just because it's so different from what I'm used to seeing from you. Don't really have any complaints, good work to me  Good job! |
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lenton
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Post by lenton on Sept 19, 2013 19:27:53 GMT -5
Thanks and yeah, it's versatility lol.
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Vincent Hale
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Post by Vincent Hale on Sept 21, 2013 17:08:18 GMT -5
I thought this was a nice job in getting the character over; putting his motives out there. You portrayed him well, and seem to be comfortable enough in writing as him. Very enjoyable read and of a decent enough length. 8.75/10.
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lenton
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Post by lenton on Sept 21, 2013 21:24:56 GMT -5
Thanks fella.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 22, 2013 19:35:52 GMT -5
Enjoyed this one. Was the right length, the right description. Everything was good in it. Nice work mate.
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Good job! 
