Vincent Hale
EoV Superstar
If you want to be respected, you've got to come earn it. I don't hand out respect like it's charity.
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Post by Vincent Hale on Sept 20, 2013 15:04:04 GMT -5
Just wondering what people thought of my introduction roleplay?
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Post by Ryan Rivera on Sept 20, 2013 15:18:43 GMT -5
I thought it was solid! Great detail and a unique intro starting from the origin of the character.
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Michael James
EoV Superstar
EoV Official Match Writer
EoV World Heavyweight Champion
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Post by Michael James on Sept 20, 2013 15:21:22 GMT -5
It kind of reminded me of a teaser trailer like you would see with upcoming films. The writing was solid and you didn't give too much away so you have lots of room for development. You seem to follow the same "less is more" rule that I apply to my writing style so I cant wait to see more of your work!
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Vincent Hale
EoV Superstar
If you want to be respected, you've got to come earn it. I don't hand out respect like it's charity.
Posts: 52
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Post by Vincent Hale on Sept 20, 2013 15:21:27 GMT -5
Thanks man. I tried to give a glimpse into what sort of character he is and the fact that he's 'trying something new' when it comes to the style he traditionally wrestles in.
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Vincent Hale
EoV Superstar
If you want to be respected, you've got to come earn it. I don't hand out respect like it's charity.
Posts: 52
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Post by Vincent Hale on Sept 20, 2013 15:23:19 GMT -5
It kind of reminded me of a teaser trailer like you would see with upcoming films. The writing was solid and you didn't give too much away so you have lots of room for development. You seem to follow the same "less is more" rule that I apply to my writing style so I cant wait to see more! Thanks man. That's pretty much what I was going for with the roleplay:: a teaser trailer of sorts, so that people would want to read more in the future. Yeah, that's a principle I tend to use in a lot of my writing (lol). |
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