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Post by Chelsea Armstrong on Sept 24, 2013 10:20:44 GMT -5
Can I get some feedback guys?
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Michael James
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Post by Michael James on Sept 24, 2013 10:39:21 GMT -5
This is exactly what I wanted to see after her loss at Chaos. At this point she's hungry for a win and is willing to go past her own limitations to take it from TJ. I'm also starting to see her moving towards the dark side with the Mistress persono so it will be interesting to see what happens at the ppv.
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Post by Chelsea Armstrong on Sept 24, 2013 11:27:49 GMT -5
Thank you, I'm glad u liked it  , also glad u caught on to the stuff with MoD lol. hoping that Tj and I can bring the best out of each other this week. Gonna be a good match...I hope! lol |
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Vincent Hale
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Post by Vincent Hale on Sept 24, 2013 15:49:53 GMT -5
I thought this was a great roleplay. It showed her emotions to losing as well as the fact that even though she has a hairline fracture of the skull, she is still intending on competing at the PPV. The exchange with the doctor was intriguing in that I'm interested to see who she's looking to bring in; when they'll be coming to help her. The length was perfect as well. 9.5/10.
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Post by Chelsea Armstrong on Sept 24, 2013 18:12:47 GMT -5
Thank you!!  had fun writing that rp and I'm excited about this 'help '  |
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Vincent Hale
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Post by Vincent Hale on Sept 24, 2013 19:19:16 GMT -5
No problems. I really enjoyed reading it and could tell you're immersed in the character. I do also like the 'dueling personalities' that you have going---you don't see it often; you do it perfectly and build the inner conflict. Makes you want to get behind the character, see how she battles with not just her opponents:: but also herself.
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Post by Jason Kaine on Sept 25, 2013 10:25:00 GMT -5
Not her....goddamnit....oh well time to kill people again....I kid I kid.....or do I?  |
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Post by Chelsea Armstrong on Sept 25, 2013 10:39:23 GMT -5
We shall see |
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, also glad u caught on to the stuff with MoD lol. hoping that Tj and I can bring the best out of each other this week. Gonna be a good match...I hope! lol
had fun writing that rp and I'm excited about this 'help '
