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Post by El Fuhrer O'Cruel on Sept 24, 2013 22:01:16 GMT -5
Firstly hola to everyone here, this is my first time participating in a e-fed since like 1999 so i am trying to get my feet wet in it again. I have some plans for this character to expand but for this first RP i kept his introduction simple and competitive so i hope you can ultimately end up being entertained by it. Feedback/Critiques welcome, especially with my grammar lol.
edit: I don't expect any brownie points for the images. disregard them if it helps.
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Vincent Hale
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If you want to be respected, you've got to come earn it. I don't hand out respect like it's charity.
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Post by Vincent Hale on Sept 25, 2013 5:35:42 GMT -5
I thought that it was a bit too short to be totally honest. Try to lengthen it a bit more in the future and give your character some life. 4.5/10.
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Post by Chelsea Armstrong on Sept 25, 2013 11:15:18 GMT -5
Not too bad, I imagined it being like one of those quick promo videos that are showed before a new talent comes in, for a match it was short. With this being your first though it can be understandable, so just lengthen your work and should be good  good luck! |
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Vincent Hale
EoV Superstar
If you want to be respected, you've got to come earn it. I don't hand out respect like it's charity.
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Post by Vincent Hale on Sept 25, 2013 14:57:48 GMT -5
Yeah, I thought the same thing but also wanted to give some advice (lol).
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Post by El Fuhrer O'Cruel on Sept 26, 2013 8:07:38 GMT -5
Those short introduction promos are kind of what i was going for to keep some of the mystique of a new character. But i agree with both of you, as a match promo it should be taken further. Balancing my ideas with having a first match at a ppv event is tough. Thanks for the critiques!
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good luck! 
