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Post by High Flying Hardcore on Sept 28, 2013 14:04:50 GMT -5
Feedback please guys? I know it was short and all but I've been very busy with English essays. Also, can anyone guess which play "The tears shall drown the wind" comes from?
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Post by Chelsea Armstrong on Sept 28, 2013 21:41:55 GMT -5
You already said it lol but yes it was short, that's really my only critique. I liked it would just have liked more to it, as for the quote I don't know it but I would like to lol. I like it.
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Post by lenton on Sept 28, 2013 22:18:07 GMT -5
You might want to make a Macbeth quote a little less obvious next time fella :-P. Got it straight away when I read the rplay.
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Post by Vincent Hale on Sept 28, 2013 22:20:20 GMT -5
Don't know the quote, but my thoughts are the same as Chelsea's on this one. Just needs to be a bit longer but understandable with all the essays you said you've been doing.
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Post by High Flying Hardcore on Oct 4, 2013 11:13:25 GMT -5
Cheers for understanding guys. I should be done with all my homework this weekend I'll be writing good lengths of RPs next week
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