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Post by Jason Kaine on Oct 3, 2013 20:50:24 GMT -5
I feel it's some of the best stuff I've done in a while. Also thoughts on the name change?
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Post by Tommy Rowan on Oct 3, 2013 23:25:44 GMT -5
Pretty good rp. A bunch of grammar and spelling mistakes which messed with me a couple times, but I figured it out. All in all was a pretty decent rp. Nice work.
And as for name change......ehhhhh.
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Vincent Hale
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If you want to be respected, you've got to come earn it. I don't hand out respect like it's charity.
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Post by Vincent Hale on Oct 4, 2013 17:52:45 GMT -5
I liked the way you handled the gimmick change. Thought it was an interesting and creative way of doing it:: showing that there's raw emotion going into this match. The structure and readability of the rplay was amazing, and all in all, it was a great job. 9.4/10.
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