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Post by Tommy Rowan on Oct 9, 2013 21:52:27 GMT -5
This one had 3 scenes. I tried a different way of coding and I think it came out good. Splitting it up into scenes I think made it easier to read. Let me know what you all think of this one. I think it went pretty good. A lot of character development.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 10, 2013 8:25:06 GMT -5
I may be a little biased but I liked it. Came off well and connected with mine in a way to give his pov.  |
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Post by Michael James on Oct 10, 2013 8:40:30 GMT -5
I'm curious to know how to go about finding this Fuckyourself Lane. I tried looking around Fuckyourface Boulevard but couldn't find shit.
Kidding aside I thought that roleplay was brilliant. Rowan and James have to be the biggest assholes in the fed so its good thing we're on the same side lol. I really liked the part where you pulled a .44 on those pricks from the boardwalk beating.
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Post by Tommy Rowan on Oct 10, 2013 23:06:31 GMT -5
Appreciate it peeps. Fuckyourself Lane is right down the street from Shoveitupyourass Drive.
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Post by High Flying Hardcore on Oct 11, 2013 11:05:37 GMT -5
I really liked the set out and the style of the whole ting being on camera like a movie. I hope you don't mind if I try the style out  . Also, it's really good that you leave room for other fedders to call out Rowan. Too many guys ight as if they are John Cena with no flaws etc. The smoking and the first drink and all leave something for your opponents to write on if you know what I mean. |
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. Also, it's really good that you leave room for other fedders to call out Rowan. Too many guys ight as if they are John Cena with no flaws etc. The smoking and the first drink and all leave something for your opponents to write on if you know what I mean.