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Post by High Flying Hardcore on Oct 20, 2013 16:30:41 GMT -5
Feedback would be greatly appreciated
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Post by Chelsea Armstrong on Oct 20, 2013 16:39:48 GMT -5
I actually really enjoyed this one, a few grammar or spelling errors but not enough to distract me, besides we all make them lol. You had me pulled in the entire roleplay, I wanted to know wat was going to happen next...and I still do. I'm interested in see if u tie the blond in to any of ur future rps. Good job, as usual
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Post by High Flying Hardcore on Oct 20, 2013 17:58:07 GMT -5
Thanks very much, cheals. I'll try and blame the grammer and spelling mistakes on being tired and I fear that my second RP I've put up will have more errors as i'm close to falling asleep lol.
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