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Post by Jason Kaine on Oct 20, 2013 21:11:42 GMT -5
Even though it wasn't finished I'd still live some feedback
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Post by High Flying Hardcore on Oct 21, 2013 5:56:50 GMT -5
Quite a good role play but as you say, it wasn't finished. I especially liked the part in the Blackpool tower. One critique though, interview and press conference role plays are overdone and generic. Try something outside in the streets or in a restraunt etc.
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Post by Chelsea Armstrong on Oct 21, 2013 6:08:22 GMT -5
I actually disagree with u alil Hfh, yeah it's something that is done a lot but I think for this situation it worked really well. I had been looking forward to the full thing so it does suck that stuff prevented u from finishing but I still enjoyed it. As I told you before I feel like we saw a more real side to Jason when he was with Roxanne, there wasn't this Guy putting on an act to see tough or anything of the sort, it was different from ur normal writing and I really liked it. Overall I loved it, especially for it being unfinished.
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Post by lenton on Oct 21, 2013 7:20:26 GMT -5
Sometimes, generic and simple gets the message across best.
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Post by Jason Kaine on Oct 21, 2013 10:41:21 GMT -5
Sometimes, generic and simple gets the message across best. People called Austins trunks generic. Look where he's at |
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