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Post by Lone Wolf on Oct 20, 2013 23:09:38 GMT -5
Would it be possible to get feedback for my Two Sides Rp... Been a while since I rped at all...
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Post by lenton on Oct 20, 2013 23:36:13 GMT -5
Not going to lie- it was a tiring read. Doesn't mean bad, just a little too lengthy for my personal tastes (As Chelsea will tell you, I'm not a fan of rplays that are too lengthy). It was entertaining enough, but drained me at the end, as well as the grammar being off at times and word usage (another thing I'm picky about). Other than that, good rplay.
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Post by Lone Wolf on Oct 20, 2013 23:39:55 GMT -5
Thanks Lenton
Not going to lie it was pretty rushed, alot of family distractions at the minute making really hard to concentrate fully
It may have even been a bit late in posting it but at least it's up
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Post by lenton on Oct 20, 2013 23:56:12 GMT -5
All good fella. I did like the Tazz reference at the end haha.
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Post by Chelsea Armstrong on Oct 21, 2013 7:36:04 GMT -5
As if I even need to comment here...lol Rob you pretty much know what I think considering you got my feedback basically all day yesterday lol. I always love your work, Chase Michaels is a character that I have been pulled into ever since I practically joined NWA. You know how to make your characters come to life and can entertain people in doing so, as for the rp as I said I love your work. Yeah it was long but sometimes it needs to be in order to get everything across that you're wanting to. You didn't disappoint by any means, I knew you would throw out one hell of a rp and you did  Good job! |
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Post by Tommy Rowan on Oct 21, 2013 11:29:18 GMT -5
Was worth the wait. Loved it. You definetly have a chance at beating Michael this week. Nice work.
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Good job! 
