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Post by karremalbashir on Aug 14, 2013 19:34:50 GMT -5
Can I get feedback on my RP?
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Post by Jason Kaine on Aug 14, 2013 20:00:56 GMT -5
Ian, I booked you into the main event and gave Kareem this big return hoping for something more. Not to say your writing isn't good but you need more. Now I know my motto is quality > quantity but it's hard to find enough quality to win in only a few short paragraphs. Not to be mean but a few paragraphs can win you match every now and then but it will not win you a championship.
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Post by karremalbashir on Aug 14, 2013 21:11:09 GMT -5
Extended a bit
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Post by Tommy Rowan on Aug 18, 2013 23:41:57 GMT -5
It was good, but Ian, you need to work on the length. IF you could extend your rps, you would rule at this thing. Length could be your downfall.
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Post by karremalbashir on Aug 19, 2013 18:08:02 GMT -5
It was good, but Ian, you need to work on the length. IF you could extend your rps, you would rule at this thing. Length could be your downfall. I'm trying I'll work on it next week. |
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Post by Tommy Rowan on Aug 19, 2013 18:10:17 GMT -5
Alrighty. If you get the length down, you'll be Main Eventing all the time.
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Post by karremalbashir on Aug 19, 2013 18:11:56 GMT -5
thanks man
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