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Post by Deleted on Aug 15, 2013 0:47:48 GMT -5
Just wondering what everyone thought of my first rp here
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Post by Tommy Rowan on Aug 18, 2013 23:40:40 GMT -5
I thought it was pretty good. I liked how you you explained why you were here and gave a little back story. The only thing I can say is reread and use a spell check program. Other then that, nice job. Glad you posted so soon.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 19, 2013 1:14:04 GMT -5
well he was in an old efed and i cannot remember the name that it was so long ago but i was hoping to make a good intro into the fed try and build him from here wins and losses will affect how he goes from here differently.
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Post by Tommy Rowan on Aug 19, 2013 1:21:09 GMT -5
Sweet! Can't wait to see his journey.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 19, 2013 1:31:49 GMT -5
can't wait to tell his story hope to take him a long way
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