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Post by Chelsea Armstrong on Aug 27, 2013 10:58:56 GMT -5
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Post by Michael James on Aug 27, 2013 11:06:59 GMT -5
My recommendation is you do it again with more stuff about how great this James guy is. Just kidding lol. I thought it was an awesome read to tell you the truth. I like how she's cocky but at the same time she's open minded to new competition. I cant wait to see more.
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Post by Chelsea Armstrong on Aug 27, 2013 17:07:36 GMT -5
Lol thanks, and well that certain James Guy u mentioned caught my eye with that segment  lol If ur anything similar to that I definitely look forward to seeing some more of your work |
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Post by lenton on Aug 28, 2013 15:53:00 GMT -5
You know my thoughts already, but one thing- you know I personally prefer script style (easier to know who's talking; when), but if you're doing novel style, then writing it as if it were a book is the best way to do it.
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Post by Qwerty on Aug 28, 2013 18:49:32 GMT -5
You know my thoughts already, but one thing- you know I personally prefer script style (easier to know who's talking; when), but if you're doing novel style, then writing it as if it were a book is the best way to do it. Ya know I never thought of it like that.....great point though |
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Post by lenton on Aug 29, 2013 2:06:35 GMT -5
You know my thoughts already, but one thing- you know I personally prefer script style (easier to know who's talking; when), but if you're doing novel style, then writing it as if it were a book is the best way to do it. Ya know I never thought of it like that.....great point though Yeah. I.E: "Come here," she said, in a calm tone of voice. "Okay, what do you want?" He replied, slightly annoyed as he was busily working on his homework; didn't want to be distracted. It's just easier to read that way. |
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lol If ur anything similar to that I definitely look forward to seeing some more of your work 
